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A True Friend by ~sussiekitten:iconsussiekitten:

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[Music starts, angry guitar, quick drums]

[Chorus]
A true friend would always be there to hold you close
A true friend wouldn’t leave you in the dark
A true friend would stay by your side forever and more
A true friend would… but never you

[Sad tunes, soft drums, keyboard and bass]

I don’t know when this all began
I don’t know when you started to refuse my hand
There’s so much going on
I’m stuck in a permanent darkness

The world has lost its shine
Ever since you left it has been so dank
Why can’t you come back to me?
Please return and make it alright

[Angry guitar, quicker drums, keyboard in the background]

[Chorus]
A true friend would always be there to hold you close
A true friend wouldn’t leave you in the dark
A true friend would stay by your side forever and more
A true friend would… but never you

[The bass picks up]

One day you just disappeared
Packed your things and left us all behind
Did you never like me, stand my very presence?
Did I manage to chase you… away?

I can’t stand the dark, I can’t stand the pain
I just want the light back into my life
Was it too much to ask for, for you to help me?
Why does this always happen to me?!

[Bass turns darker, guitar and keyboard]

[Chorus]
A true friend would always be there to hold you close
A true friend wouldn’t leave you in the dark
A true friend would stay by your side forever and more
A true friend would… but never you

[Spoken]
I want to forgive you, I can’t
I want to chase you down, I won’t
I want an explanation, please don’t tell me
I want to know… why you left me all alone

[Louder drums and bass]

[Chorus]
A true friend would always be there to hold you close
A true friend wouldn’t leave you in the dark
A true friend would stay by your side forever and more
A...

[Keyboard and guitar enters again]

[Chorus]
A true friend would always be there to hold you close
A true friend wouldn’t leave you in the dark
A true friend would stay by your side forever and more
A true friend would… but never you

[Sung with the Chorus]
I don’t understand, why can’t I hate you
I won’t understand; do I still love you?
I can’t make up my mind
But it’s over now… never you

[Chorus]
A true friend would always be there to hold you close
A true friend wouldn’t leave you in the dark
A true friend would stay by your side forever and more
A true friend would… but never you

[Angry guitar, quick drums]

A true friend would never walk away from it all
But you never were a true friend, I know that now
So, my friend…
Goodbye

[End music]
©2007-2009 ~sussiekitten
:iconsussiekitten:

Author's Comments

Just one last song before I leave for *insert random place here*. One week without internet. How the *bleep*ing hell am I gonna survive?! :XD:

Lols. Anyhow, this was made while listening to various songs. Wrote it yesterday when my fingers itched to abuse the keyboard, and abuse they did ;P
This might end up in scraps later. I'm not so sure about it and all that...

I actually got the inspiration for the theme from a list I found. It's what a best friend would do in a situation and what a true friend would do in the same. Hehe. Quite amusing.

Comments are very welcome. Art (songs and texts are also art people!) thieves are not.

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~setdelay Sep 28, 2007, 11:13:20 AM
This relates a little to my current situation, and it's also a lot of truth in it. I think I like chorus the most. Really good.
:iconsussiekitten:
~sussiekitten Sep 28, 2007, 1:27:50 PM
Then I really feel for you. No one should be in such a position. I do think about truth or how some see the truth when I write, this piece as well.
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. ^^

--
"HOLD IT!! ... This is a hill, right? It's got a top and two sides."

~Take it from me, there’s never a wrong moment to sound smashed, no matter how sober you actually are.~
:iconbunnylovesmusic:
~bunnylovesmusic Sep 30, 2007, 3:20:52 AM
Theres a lesson for people in this song. Good work honey. And yeah I know, those best friend - true friend things can really get ya thinking
:iconsussiekitten:
~sussiekitten Oct 7, 2007, 6:53:51 AM
Heh, I sure hope so. I just wanted to use some inside knowledge to educate the world. And the list sure get's me thinking! I wanna make one myself someday soon. Just gotta... find my life again. :XD:

--
"HOLD IT!! ... This is a hill, right? It's got a top and two sides."

~Take it from me, there’s never a wrong moment to sound smashed, no matter how sober you actually are.~
:iconbunnylovesmusic:
~bunnylovesmusic Oct 7, 2007, 7:14:51 AM
haha yea =P how was spain?
:iconsussiekitten:
~sussiekitten Oct 7, 2007, 8:44:56 AM
Hehe ;D It was nice. I was bored out of my mind because of the lack of internet, but I got some work done ;p It's not finished yet though, cos I need to goggle up some pics of the books, but I know what I'm gonna say so. Hehe.

How're you doing?

--
"HOLD IT!! ... This is a hill, right? It's got a top and two sides."

~Take it from me, there’s never a wrong moment to sound smashed, no matter how sober you actually are.~
:iconbunnylovesmusic:
~bunnylovesmusic Oct 7, 2007, 9:03:03 AM
umm... updates tomorrow sweetie^^^; dont wanna rant on and on about it here
:iconsussiekitten:
~sussiekitten Oct 7, 2007, 9:22:36 AM
Ah, I see. ;D Though.. you don't have much time to rant then either. :XD: Lols. Anyway, see ya tomorrow!

--
"HOLD IT!! ... This is a hill, right? It's got a top and two sides."

~Take it from me, there’s never a wrong moment to sound smashed, no matter how sober you actually are.~
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